This is a third draft of our music video, the feedback we got on this was that some parts of the lip sync are slightly out of time, we have now changed this to correct it. We have also received feedback from our teacher when she watched this video, she suggested:
- We need to sort out the contrast and brightness with the majority of the shots to ensure they are all equal.
- We need to test out different ways to merge the split screen together (near the end of the video) to make us look less segregated when Renae is singing "sticks and stones".
- We need to go over all of our cuts between each shot to see if we can match them up more significantly with the beat of the song.
- We need to cut out bits of video where the camera jitters EG pip on the tractor.
- Remove the footage of pip walking away from the camera. (2:01)
- Rearrange some of the single shots so that the same person isnt next to eachother after each cut. EG pip walking on the logs and pip in the corn field (1:47)
- Zoom out the shot where Sophie hits the girls on the head.
- Contrast majority of the shots.
- Pan next too the wooden panels is too boring.
- 2:50- lip sync is out.
