This is the second draft of our music video, you can see the difference in this from our first draft and the progress that we've made. Since our first draft, we have had another shooting day where we filmed some more footage which allowed us to have some more add in clips into the bits of the video. We also brought in the theme of the balloons within this shoot which we felt was a cute idea for our video and made it more fun.
Some things we need to work on are:
We need to sort out the contrast and brightness with the majority of the shots to ensure they are all equal.
We need to test out different ways to merge the split screen together (near the end of the video) to make us look less segregated when Renae is singing "sticks and stones".
We need to go over all of our cuts between each shot to see if we can match them up more significantly with the beat of the song.
We need to cut out bits of video where the camera jitters EG pip on the tractor.
Remove the footage of pip walking away from the camera. (2:01)
Rearrange some of the single shots so that the same person isnt next to eachother after each cut. EG pip walking on the logs and pip in the corn field (1:47)
Zoom out the shot where Sophie hits the girls on the head.
